Alexis's Learning Goals

These are my learning goals. I have to achieve them to make progress.

The Worst Day Ever

THE WORST DAY EVER

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

THE WORST DAY EVER

It is a sunny day me my, mum and dad was  going  for a walk around the national animal park in South Africa. It was December 25th we came to a riverbank. Me and my family are walking along the riverbank. I could see my dad stop i don’t know if there was something wrong.

Then I saw a pride of lions resting in the sun.  Than they are going to get me.  BOOM !  The lions are chasing me, I am the baby buffalo. The lions are getting closer and closer to me, I was running as fast as I could. I ran into the water a crocodile came out and grabbed my tail it hurt really bad, I know they would come after me because I am the weakest and slowest. Then the lions and the crocodile were having a fight like a tug of  war to see if the lions will have me for lunch or their worst enemy the  crocodile. Then the crocodile teeth slipped the lions won and they brought me to shore. I could feel the lions sharp, scary and ferocious teeth. It felt like I broke a bone. Then my family came back to save me, my dad poked the lions with his horns the lions ran away, I thought I would be dead by now. Then my dad scared him away I was relieved, that  got to spend the rest of my life with my family.