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Friday, July 29, 2016

The Amazing Space Chimp.

This is my planning of a writing piece I am going to make called "The Amazing Space Chimp." I hope you like it.

5 comments:

  1. That's really cool Alexis. I really like how you colour coded your mindmup Alexis. Next time you can put a little bit more titles.

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  3. This Is amazing Alexis, I like how you described what space and earth looks like. Next time you could ask someone to check if you have spelled words correctly.

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  4. Hi Alexis, I like how you put it in different order. Maybe next time you could put some different words. You could move some words around? Great work Alexis keep it up.

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