Tom True heart
I was in a dark forest. I was on a mission to find my six brothers and their brides. I am feeling a bit worried because I might not find them. I have a special sword so if anything tries to attack me, I can defend myself. Being the size of a thumb is very hard, because everything is bigger than you.
Then I found something Strange it was a house, there was a little crack in the door. It looked like it was abandoned. I started to look around the disgusting place, but they weren’t there so I tried to find my way out. Finally I found the way out, so I just started walking the opposite way.
1 hour later.
Finally another building, I wonder if anyone lives there. I wonder if they know who took my brothers and their wives. The door was Wide open I got a bit scared there was a leopard sitting down, looking at me. I grabbed my sword, because the leopard tried to eat me. When I saw my sword it ran for the hills.
Then I heard something, it Sounded like a wicked witch. I saw a Shadow, she is coming down the stairs. I need to hide because they might see me. They might have a Special potion. I hid behind the table thinking they wouldn’t see me but the wicked witch saw me.
She locked me up in her basement. I thought my brother and their wife’s would be there. I need to keep trying and never give up. I finally made it out of the basement, and I saw her go to the wall it must be a Secret door I wonder where it goes.
I went around looking for the door. Finally I found it, then I heard the witch. I needed to run as fast as I can. I made it to the end of the dark spooky tunnel. At the end was a little cage but there was nothing in there.
Then I saw a little hole on the ground, I am a bit spooked out what if there’s another witch down there, I’m brave I can do it. I went into the cage, then I heard the witch coming so I climbed down the ladder. Once I got down I grabbed my sword and started walking to a door.
Oh no I stepped on a trap, I heard the witch coming down the ladder I saw my brother they were at the door. Then the witch kept calling big spiders to come so I can’t get to my brothers and their wifes. Finally I killed all the spiders, now I can save my brothers and their wives from the wicked witch.
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