Beyond the lines
One disgusting day I was on a boat with my little brother Jack. My brother and I are on a boat with some army men. There were like 4 boat with like 10 people in them, I started to get a bit terrified when we got to land my little brother was really scared. The sky was dark, like dark chocolate it felt like we could eat it. We all got off the boat then everyone started to run to safe places so they don’t die.
Every one started to die we didn’t know what to do we are so scared that we were going to die. We didn’t know if we would survive everyone kept running so they didn’t die. Then we started to hear bombs our enemies started to throw bombs at us I don’t know if they know that there are little kids in the war. This place is terrifying everyone started dying left to right it is so scarey we don’t know what to do. We found a safe place to rest for a little bit lots of bombs are close to us we need to move now!!
We started to run again my little brother is so so so so scared that we wouldn’t make it, we are so tired. We need to find our grandad we hope he isn’t dead, we were so sad that he had to go to war, that is why we came here to try and save him so he doesn’t die. The bombs are so close to us it is like we are going to die. We can hardly see because it is so dark we will never find our grandad it is just too hard to find anything. Finally we see him we ran as fast as we can to get to him we made it we are with our grandad once again. Then he just ran off I don’t think he saw us, a bomb just missed him and I think he is dead. I felt so devastated as I got back on the ship to head home.
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