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Friday, April 7, 2017

The Cloud

The Cloud

There was a little cloud only 8 years old staying with his family. He always wanted to go on a adventure by himself. But he had to wait until he was bigger and Stronger. 10 years later. I am now 18 I must be old enough go on a adventure by myself, I must be! I now look like a some nice yummy candy floss. The next day something happened lighting came down and Separated me from my family.By the way my name is Jack. Finally I can go on a adventure by myself, with no one to tell me what to do. The wind can’t take me anywhere, I am In control of my body.


I wanted to go on a adventure by myself because I had no friends to play with and I have no brothers or sisters I’m the only kid. A magical thing was right in front of me. I thought it wouldn’t give me any magical powers but it did. I wonder what kind of super powers I have. My goal is to help everyone in the world. Then I will be the greatest and nicest cloud in the world, and all the clouds would want to be me.


Then something happened something started pulling me I don’t know what’s happening it’s pulling really hard i’m trying as hard as I can. I turned around it was a humongous giant it was trying to eat me because it thinks i’m candy floss. 30 minutes later. I finally got out of the giants hands I know I need to fight the giant so he doesn’t try to eat anyone in the city. The giant was as big like the moon. Then the giant started to go after people in the big tall buildings, he is trying to eat everyone I know I need to save them. But I don’t think i’m not strong enough because I’m too small. I need to save them! I saw the giant pick up someone he started to open his mouth I went flying I was going so to try and save the little girl. I went as fast as I can to save her she started getting closer and closer to the giant's mouth. I went past the giant mouth and saved the little girl now I need to get rid of the giant and save the city. I need to fight the giant and save the city I started raining on him. He started to walking away from the city.

2 comments:

  1. hi Alexis i like your writing,i miss you so much i see you soon.how is school?

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